THE TOBACCO TASTERS
B. Zaragoza
THE TOBACCO TASTERS
Copyright © 2013 B. Zaragoza
ISBN: 9781311021090
This is a work of fiction. Names, characters, places and incidents are either the product of the author’s imagination or are used fictitiously, and any resemblance to events as well as actual persons, living or dead, is entirely coincidental.
Cover Design by Melissa Muldoon
Published By
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SETTING:
A tobacco tasting room in the Yelets Cigarette Factory
Present Day Yelets, Russia.
CHARACTERS:
PETR - 50ish, gaunt, shockingly browned fingernails.
AGATA - 50ish, wears red lacquered fingernails and a brown flowered dress taken out at the waist.
SERGEI - A stout professional in smoke-stained suit.
PETR sits at a long table that is smattered with balls of tobacco, spice glasses, and rolling paper. He blends bits of the tobacco and spices together, rolls the mixture into a cigarette, and lights it. He takes a long hard drag. Then he exhales, shoves his face into the resulting ball of smoke, and sniffs.
SERGEI enters. Petr stands.
SERGEI
Has she arrived?
PETR
Not yet.
SERGEI
I’ve made the decision. I want you to tell her.
PETR
Me?
SERGEI
Indeed. Comrade, I leave you to your work.
Sergei exits. Petr sits down, picks up a cigarette. He puffs then sniffs, puffs, sniffs. He crushes the cigarette into an ashtray, pops up from his seat, and paces the room.
AGATA enters. She takes off her coat.
AGATA
Twenty minutes I waited. Twenty minutes at the spice shop. One would think Brezhnev was still alive.
She darts a look at the table.
AGATA (CONT’D)
Gustav will be here any minute and this place is a stink.
PETR
Yes, yes. You need not worry about Gustav.
Agata spots the crushed cigarette.
AGATA
A new flavor?
She picks it up. Petr waits, anxious. She lights the cigarette and goes through the same exact spiel as Petr did just a moment ago: inhaling and holding her breath for a long time, then exhaling quickly, and throwing her face into the smoke.
AGATA (CONT’D)
Coriander, lemon rind, and a little peppermint.
PETR
Exactly.
AGATA
It’s no good. Take the lemon rind out and --
PETR
This is my project.
AGATA
What do you mean, your project? Even Putin isn’t so much of a capitalist. What is it with you today?
PETR
Nothing, nothing at all. Well, something.
Agata sighs.
AGATA
The Curing Committee. Late on its shredding quota again.
PETR
The quota. Always concerned about the quota.
AGATA
You certainly are tight today. What’s happened?
Petr motions for Agata to sit. He does the same, then takes a pack of Marlboro’s from his shirt pocket. He offers one to Agata.
AGATA
You know I don’t smoke. What is it?
Petr lights the cigarette.
PETR
Gustav died.
Agata lets this sink in.
AGATA
It can’t be.
PETR
The funeral will be held in the company chapel tomorrow.
AGATA
Gustav... dead?
PETR
Dead.
AGATA
He seemed so... so healthy. Well, other than the cough, but after thirty-seven years --
PETR
Thirty-six years.
AGATA
What was it? A shot through the right temple?
PETR
Gustav would never --
AGATA
Come to think of it, he had mentioned a doctor’s appointment. A brave man like Gustav --
PETR
But it wasn’t --
AGATA
Oh that nasty, horrible, unstoppable enemy. Lodging itself into his lungs. He got the diagnosis, but wouldn’t watch it destroy him. He’d rather die by his own hand.
PETR
He choked on a cabbage roll.
AGATA
A courageous man. He’s our -- cabbage roll?
PETR
He took supper alone last night.
Pause.
AGATA
I could curse perestroika, him dying for lack of air. How will the Degustation Committee survive?
PETR
Sergei has some ideas.
AGATA
We are a body without a head.
PETR
Others are capable of taking his place.
AGATA
Others? What others? Who but Gustav knew how to blend tobacco delicate enough for the palette of a nursing mother, yet robust enough for the hardened soldier?
PETR
Oh for God’s sake, he was no Lenin!
AGATA
You never understood him.
PETR
Sergei is already considering candidates for the Chairmanship.
AGATA
New candidates? He’s not thinking of hiring an American?
PETR
No, no. Nothing like that. He has two candidates in mind.
AGATA
Internal candidates then?
PETR
Yes.
AGATA
Not Pavel! That rat has been waiting for this very moment.
PETR
Not Pavel.
AGATA
Then?
PETR
Me. Sergei chose me.
AGATA
You?
PETR
And why not?
AGATA
Nothing, nothing.
Agata takes Petr’s hand and pats it.
AGATA (CONT’D)
My little Pipka is on his way up.
PETR
You don’t think I’m qualified?
AGATA
Of course you’re qualified, but --
PETR
But what?
AGATA
Seniority will likely play a role.
PETR
Seniority? My scrotum doesn’t hang down to my ankles yet, but I have twenty-nine years in the business.
AGATA
Twenty-eight years. Who is the other candidate?
Petr hesitates.
PETR
You.
Agata smiles to herself.
PETR (CONT’D)
Sergei wants us to come up with a new flavor for Mocno.
AGATA
I see. Something sweet perhaps. Nutmeg and sugar?
PETR
It’s a competition. Whoever presents the best flavor becomes Chairman.
AGATA
On second thought, nutmeg and sugar are not the best choice.
PETR
Agata!
AGATA
What?
PETR
You want to compete against me?
AGATA
Well?
PETR
What will people say?
AGATA
Oh let them talk.
PETR
But it’s not right for a husband to compete against his wife. Especially not for the most prestigious position in the Yelets factory. And what if I lose? None of the tasters
will respect me.
AGATA
Don’t exaggerate.
PETR
I think you should tell Sergei you’re backing out of the competition.
AGATA
You’re joking.
PETR
Tell him I will make the best Chairman.
AGATA
It’s out of the question. After all, I am the one who discovered more than two hundred new flavors.
PETR
You never worked your way through curing, paper, grading. I struggled my way to the Degustation Committee.
AGATA
I recommended you. Gustav thought you were a mere greeny. And before you caught my eye at the University, you couldn’t even tell the difference between air and flue cured leaf.
PETR
I spent more time than anyone in this tasting room. Here. Alone. Even when you were out with Gustav.
AGATA
Gustav was a man married to his work.
PETR
Who needed a porcelain doll to adorn his workplace.
AGATA
He recognized my talent.
PETR
Your talent for more than tasting tobacco.
AGATA
Don’t start! We both graduated from Moscow Tobacco University with distinctions and then --
PETR
I finished number one. You fell in love with me for that very reason. Until, of course, they sent me to the Curing Committee. Then you turned your face to Gustav.
AGATA
Your suspicious nature has always been a deficiency.
PETR
I was the one who stood by while Gustav’s chin hung over you.
AGATA
Nonsense.
PETR
If it wasn’t for the company, I would have --
AGATA
You would never. You would be too afraid. Afraid that you would be the one to be purged. We are not the Grading or Curing Committee. If you and I had divorced, the tasters would fear that one of us would sabotage the other. We would be more than just shamed, more than just talked about. Gustav and the others would keep us under their scrutiny. Eventually one of us would vanish.
PETR
I was the one who bore the snickers of our colleagues.
AGATA
Who always knew you couldn’t distinguish between anise and acetone.
PETR
I have born your contempt of me all these years, but now --
AGATA
Yes, you are my imprisoned Avakuum.
PETR
I secretly wished for this day, wished --
AGATA
Wished that Gustav would die so that I would finally turn into a dutiful wife and help you become Chairman?
Petr drops his cigarette to the floor.
AGATA (CONT’D)
Typical male sentiment. But we don’t live in those boyar times.
Petr crushes the cigarette underneath his heel.
PETR
You are right. We live in new times. And without Gustav, you have no allies in the Degustation Committee. And so, Agata, I want a divorce.
AGATA
You can’t do that!
PETR
It’s over. Over and done.
Sergei enters. They both startle to attention.
SERGEI
Good, good. You’re both here.
(to Agata)
I trust you’ve heard the tragic news.
Agata nods, pulls a handkerchief out from between her breasts.
SERGEI (CONT’D)
Our competitors have been waiting for this very moment. We can’t show any sign of weakness.
Agata pats her eyes.
AGATA
No. We’d be taken to our knees.
SERGEI
I have given it some thought and realize that having a married couple compete for the Chairmanship is unwise.
AGATA
You have made a decision then?
SERGEI
Yes. Gustav will remain Chairman.
AGATA
Gustav?
PETR
We will keep a dead Chairman?
SERGEI
You both will be in charge of the committee, at least until Mocno is firmly established among the youth. Only then will we announce Gustav’s death to the world.
PETR
Work together?
SERGEI
We need solidarity at this critical time.
PETR
But --
SERGEI
Every man and woman is necessary for the task at hand.
PETR
No. We can’t. We won’t.
Sergei peers at Petr.
SERGEI
Any hint of sabotage would compromise the entire factory.
Silence. Then, Petr bows his head. Agata smiles.
AGATA
We will work together.
SERGEI
Good. I have full confidence you will find a robust flavor for our budding smokers. Comrades, devote your every breath to Mocno. I'll see you at the funeral.
Sergei exits. Petr turns to Agata.
PETR
The Degustation Committee --
AGATA
Will go on.
PETR
With me.
AGATA
And me.
Petr walks over to a chair and lights a cigarette. Agata sits down too, pinches some spices on a stub from the ashtray and lights it. They both inhale their cigarettes, their eyes pinned on each other, their faces turning blue.
THE END
This short play is based on an article in the Los Angeles Times about real Tobacco Tasters located in Russia.
About The Author:
B. Zaragoza is a writer living in San Diego, California.
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