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  London, also praised the volume: “It is new in form, as all genuine poetry

  is new in form; it is musical with a new music, and that without any strain-

  ing after newness. The form and music are a natural, integral part of the

  poet’s amazingly fine presentation of his vision of the world.”28 Positive

  reviews did little for the book’s sales: by 1919 it had sold enough copies

  to just cover expenses, and the publisher was able to pay back £1 and 15 s.

  of the £5 which Ezra Pound had lent the firm in support of publication

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  costs. Pound asked that the outstanding amount be given to Eliot as royal-

  ties. By 1921 the book had sold 371 copies, with Eliot receiving £10.29

  In June 1917 Eliot was appointed assistant editor of the Egoist, a posi-

  tion he held until the end of 1918. His salary was £36 per year, £12 of

  which was secretly provided by Ezra Pound from money furnished by

  John Quinn, an American lawyer and patron of letters. Eliot’s life now as-

  sumed a steady routine of work. He rose two hours early in the morning

  to concentrate on his own writing; then worked an eight-hour day at the

  bank; then returned home to write reviews and fulfill his editorial duties for

  the Egoist. He also cultivated an increasingly wide circle of acquaintances.

  He met Richard Aldington, a young poet also associated with the Egoist.

  Through Bertrand Russell he was introduced to Lady Ottoline Morrell, a

  noted hostess. He was introduced to Virginia and Leonard Woolf and by

  late 1918 was being invited to their home in Richmond, Hogarth House.

  He got to know Sydney Schi¤, a wealthy patron of the arts who was creat-

  ing a new journal, Arts and Letters. Predictably, his activities were so many that he found it diªcult to concentrate on writing poetry. To get over his

  writer’s block he began to write in French, and in July 1917 he published

  three poems in French, and a fourth in English, in the Little Review. It was the first verse he had written in more than a year.

  For Eliot 1918 was “a most exhausting year, alarms, illness, movings,

  and military diªculties” ( LOTSE, 259–260). In the early part of the year,

  Vivien and he were both so tired that they decided to take a small cottage

  in Marlow, some forty miles outside of London, in June. They leased it for

  five years and sublet their flat in London, but now Eliot had to meet the

  added expenses of a long commute. Throughout the year he continued

  to ask for money from his mother, father, and brother Henry. In July he

  conceived the idea of enlisting in the U.S. military, and so began a pro-

  tracted a¤air of bureaucratic delays and conflicting accounts of what he

  had to do to enlist. In October, Eliot moved back into the flat at 18 Crawford

  Mansions, while Vivien stayed on in Marlow for a few weeks more. Soon

  they were both ill with influenza, and Vivien’s nerves were so bad that she

  could “hardly sleep at all” ( LOTSE, 259). Though Eliot had managed in

  the spring to write four poems, which were published in the September

  issue of the Little Review, that was the extent of his output for the year.

  (The four were “Sweeney among the Nightingales,” “Dans le restaurant,”

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  “Mr. Eliot’s Sunday Morning Service,” and “Whispers of Immortality.”) To

  do better, he resolved to cut back on writing for the Egoist, allegedly on

  the advice of his doctor.

  Despite having written only eight poems in two years, by late 1918

  Eliot was involved in two book projects. One was for an edition of prose

  and verse which he had submitted in mid-October 1918 to Alfred Knopf,

  a young American publisher who had recently published a book by Pound.

  Eliot was unhappy with the projected volume but eager to have something

  published in the United States so that he could show his parents “that I

  have not made a mess of my life, as they are inclined to believe” ( LOTSE,

  266). But before Knopf could reach a decision, Eliot’s father died on 7 Janu-

  ary 1919. Eliot was stricken with grief, but still more determined to have

  a book published in the United States.

  The other project was a small edition of his most recent poems, to be

  published by the Hogarth Press of Leonard and Virginia Woolf. The book

  contained only seven poems, and the edition, published in May 1919, com-

  prised “fewer than 250” copies.30 Still, it was a sign that Eliot was beginning

  to make a reputation for himself among a small, discerning public. And

  there were to be more such signs in the course of 1919. In March, Eliot

  was invited to become assistant editor of a literary journal that was being

  revived with new capital, the Athenaeum, edited by John Middleton Murry.

  Eliot turned down the position. He preferred the security o¤ered by his

  position at Lloyds, and he wanted to remain independent of the infight-

  ing which comes with journalism: “I only write what I want to— now—

  and everyone knows that anything I do write is good. I can influence Lon-

  don opinion and English literature in a better way. I am known to be dis-

  interested. . . . There is a small and select public which regards me as the

  best living critic, as well as the best living poet, in England” ( LOTSE, 280).

  To another correspondent he explained:

  There are only two ways in which a writer can become impor-

  tant—to write a great deal, and have his writings appear every-

  where, or to write very little. It is a question of temperament.

  I write very little, and I should not become more powerful by

  increasing my output. My reputation in London is built upon

  one small volume of verse, and is kept up by printing two or

  three more poems in a year. The only thing that matters is that

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  these should be perfect in their kind, so that each should be an

  event. ( LOTSE, 285)

  In April, Eliot published his first essay in the Athenaeum, a journal

  which enjoyed a much higher circulation than the Egoist. In September

  he was asked to contribute book reviews and an occasional leading article

  to the Times Literary Supplement, as he promptly informed his mother:

  “This is the highest honour possible in the critical world of literature, and

  we are pleased” ( LOTSE, 337).

  There were further developments. As soon as he had published the

  small collection of Poems with the Hogarth Press in May 1919, Eliot agreed

  to let John Rodker publish a deluxe and limited edition of all his poems

  under the title Ara Vos Prec. The volume was to reprint the twelve poems

  contained in Prufrock and Other Observations and the seven poems recently

  published in Poems, as well as three new poems to be published in periodi-

  cals in May and September 1919 (“A Cooking Egg,” “Burbank with a Bae-

  deker; Bleistein with a Cigar,” and “Sweeney Erect”); it was also to include

  two previously unpublished poems, “Ode” and “Gerontion.” Two of the

  new poems, “Burbank with a Baedeker” and “Gerontion,” plainly invoked

  topoi of contemporary anti-Semitism. Unmentioned in contemporary re-

  views
of Eliot’s work, the subject has since become an object of consider-

  able controversy.31 Meanwhile, the protracted negotiations with the Ameri-

  can publisher Knopf, originally for a book of poems and essays, had finally

  led to a result. Knopf would publish a book of poems only. Poems, the title given to the American edition of Ara Vos Prec, would appear at the same

  time as its English counterpart, in February 1920.

  “Also,” as Eliot explained to his mother in July 1919, “as a result of my

  Athenaeum articles, I have had proposals for books from two publishers

  . . . and hope to arrange something with one or the other” ( LOTSE, 310).

  The proposal that came to fruition was for a collection of essays, an oppor-

  tunity for Eliot to gather and revise the best of his growing number of re-

  views. The result was The Sacred Wood, published in England in November

  1920, only nine months after Ara Vos Prec, and in the United States in

  February 1921, one year after Knopf’s release of Poems. Inevitably The Sacred Wood was invoked to explain the poems, and by late 1920 Eliot was increasingly recognized as an up-and-coming poet and critic, a subject of grow-

  ing controversy. In the span of a little more than eighteen months, from

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  March 1919 to November 1920, Eliot’s status had undergone a remarkable

  change.

  One other event that took place in 1919 was to prove significant. On

  5 November, Eliot wrote a letter to the New York lawyer and cultural patron

  John Quinn, enumerating his current projects: “I am at work now on an

  article ordered by the Times, and when that is o¤ I hope to get started on

  a poem that I have in mind” ( LOTSE, 344). It was his earliest reference

  to The Waste Land. The date of this reference is crucial. For a great deal

  of critical debate about The Waste Land has turned on its relationship to

  Jessie Weston’s contemporary study of the medieval Grail legends, a debate

  prompted partly by Eliot himself in the very first sentence of the notes

  which accompany the poem: “Not only the title, but the plan and a good

  deal of the incidental symbolism of the poem were suggested by Miss

  Jessie L. Weston’s book . . .” But Weston’s book was not published till late

  January 1920, more than two months after Eliot’s letter to Quinn. Whatever

  role it played in the poem’s conception and composition, it formed no part

  of the “poem I have in mind” in 1919.

  Throughout 1920 Eliot was prevented from working on the long poem

  by a combination of events. Writing The Sacred Wood proved far more

  diªcult than he had anticipated. He had originally hoped to complete it

  by the end of May, but the final manuscript was not posted to the publisher

  until 9 August, more than two months late. Then there was the flat at

  Crawford Mansions, which he and Vivien had “come to loathe on account

  of the noise and sordidness.” In June he began searching for another and

  was horrified to learn that many were priced at “two to four times what

  we pay now” ( LOTSE, 390). Housing exemplified in acute form the gen-

  eral surge in prices which followed in the immediate aftermath of the war.

  By the end of October, Eliot finally agreed on the rental terms for a new

  flat at 9, Clarence Gate Gardens, and by the end of November he moved

  in. But a third event further consumed his time, an enormous stomach

  abscess which nearly killed Vivien’s father, requiring an emergency oper-

  ation and weeks of painful recovery attended by Vivien. Finally, through-

  out 1920 Eliot complained of poor health, tiredness, and exhaustion—

  sometimes his own, sometimes Vivien’s, often that of both. Eliot’s regrets

  over not working on his projected poem recur throughout the year. To a

  novelist who was finding it diªcult to concentrate he wrote in January

  1920: “I have been trying to start work myself, and it is very diªcult when

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  both people in a household are run down” ( LOTSE, 355). To his brother he wrote in September: “I have not done any writing for months, and now

  we are both sleeping very badly. . . . I feel maddened now because I want

  to get settled quietly and write some poetry” ( LOTSE, 407). A week later

  he wrote to his mother: “I do not suppose that I shall be properly settled

  at work again till November; I have several things I want to do; and I want

  a period of tranquility to do a poem that I have in mind” ( LOTSE, 408).

  “Am I writing much?” he asked himself, echoing a friend’s question. “Only

  signing my name to leases and agreements” ( LOTSE, 409). In October

  he advised his mother regretfully: “I have of course been unable to write,

  or even read and think, for some weeks” ( LOTSE, 412). “You see,” he ex-

  plained to one correspondent, “we began looking for a flat in June, and

  since then I have simply not had the time to do a single piece of work . . .

  But I want to get to work on a poem I have in mind” ( LOTSE, 419). By

  December even the success of The Sacred Wood was beginning to irritate

  him: “I am rather tired of the book now, as I am so anxious to get on to

  new work, and I should more enjoy being praised if I were engaged on

  something which I thought better or more important. I think I shall be

  able to do so soon” ( LOTSE, 424). Eliot began writing The Waste Land two months later.

  c o m p o s i t i o n o f t h e p o e m

  To a reader encountering Eliot’s masterpiece for the first time, it can be

  disconcerting to discover that the poem is known in two di¤erent forms.

  But so it has been since 1971, when Valerie Eliot (the poet’s second wife)

  first published The Waste Land: A Facsimile and Transcription of the Original

  Drafts (hereafter TWL:AF, followed by page references), a volume which contained photographic reproductions and transcriptions of all the poem’s

  extant prepublication materials.32 For good or ill, these have become central

  to critical discussion of the poem. The problem with them, as almost every

  reviewer noted at the time, was that they are all undated, virtually inviting

  scholars to o¤er speculative chronologies that might reconstruct the se-

  quence in which Eliot wrote the poem’s various parts. For more than thirty

  years it was widely agreed that part III, or some portion of part III, was

  the first to be composed, and it was thought that this contained the poem’s

  original nucleus or program, a plan which had then dissolved or fallen

  away in the course of writing the rest of the poem.33 But this chronology

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  was purely speculative and based solely on the published facsimiles, rather

  than study of the manuscripts themselves. More specifically, it was based

  on recognizable di¤erences between the typewriter that had been used to

  type part III and the machine that had been used to type parts I and II.

  Unless one compared these typewriters with the machines used in other

  documents produced by Eliot, however, it was merely guesswork to assign

  priority to one over the other. It was not until 2004 that a scholar system-

  atically compared the typewriters and the papers used in the prepublication


  manuscripts with those that had been used in Eliot’s letters, student papers,

  essays, and poems during the period 1913–1922, a documentary base com-

  prising over 1,200 leaves of paper. The result was unequivocal: the type-

  writer used for part III was a new one that first appeared in early Septem-

  ber 1921, while the typewriter used for parts I and II was one that Eliot had

  been regularly using for the last seven years. Moreover, because the com-

  parison also extended to the kinds of paper that Eliot used during this

  span of ten years, it was possible to achieve a much more finely calibrated

  understanding of which portions were written in which sequence, and so

  resolved a long-standing debate.34 As a consequence, we now have a more

  finely calibrated understanding of how the poem came to be written.

  Eliot began writing his long poem in late January or early February

  1921, and over the next three months he completed parts I and II, more

  or less as we know them today. These he typed up in a fair copy sometime

  between 9 and 22 May (see TWL:AF, 6–21), part of an e¤ort to put his

  a¤airs in order before his mother, his brother Henry, and his sister Marian

  were to arrive for an extended visit in early June. But in early May Eliot

  also received a typescript copy of the “Circe” episode of Joyce’s Ulysses. It impressed him enormously, and in response he wrote a new beginning

  to part I ( TWL:AF, 4–5), one which portrays several incidents in the course of a drinking binge that takes place one night in Boston. The protagonists

  go to a vaudeville show, stop in a brothel, and later are saved from being

  arrested by a policeman through the intervention of Mr. Donavan, a respect-

  able citizen who has influence down at City Hall. The episode loosely re-

  calls the closing portions of the “Circe” episode, with Mr. Donavan playing

  much the same role as Corny Kelleher. The entire passage, consisting of

  fifty-five lines, was probably added to the typescript of part I in late May,

  when Eliot also gave the entire poem a provisional title, “He Do the Police

  in Di¤erent Voices.”

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  On 10 June, Eliot’s family arrived in London, where they stayed for

  ten weeks before leaving on 20 August. Eliot’s mother and his older sister

  Marian stayed in the Eliots’ flat in Clarence Gate Gardens, while Eliot and