477. motivations.] motivations. ¶ B, C

  478. reptilian . . . against] om. C

  479. Old Ones] old ones B

  480. centred] centered B, C

  481. antarctic,] Antarctic, A

  482. camera-like] camera-/like B; cameralike C

  483. trap-doors] trapdoors A, B, C

  484. subterrene] subterranean B, C

  485. trap-doors] trap doors A; trapdoors B, C

  486. furtive quasi-whispers.] furtive, quasi whispers. B [comma removed by HPL]

  487. en masse] en masse B, C

  488. time.] time. ¶ B, C

  489. half-polypous,] half polypous, B, C

  490. earth] Earth B

  491. wholly] widely B, C

  492. terrestrial] Terrestrial B

  493. non-visual] nonvisual B, C

  494. impressions.] impressions. ¶ B, C

  495. senses . . . substance] senses . . . substance B, C

  496. motion] motion, B, C

  497. earth] Earth B, C

  498. obscure trans-galactic] obscure, transgalactic B, C

  499. Yith.] Yith. ¶ B, C

  500. inhabit.] inhabit. ¶ B, C

  501. Elder Things] elder things B, C

  502. guarded.] guarded. ¶ B, C

  503. for ever] forever B, C

  504. trap-doors] trap doors A; trapdoors B, C

  505. Elder Things] elder things B, C

  506. places; fresh . . . entities.] places. B, C

  507. Elder Things] elder things B, C

  508. coloured] colored B, C

  509. aspect] aspect B, C

  510. unmentioned—at] unmentioned. At B, C

  511. like.] like. ¶ B, C

  512. plasticity, . . . lapses of visibility, . . . great winds. . . . whistling] plasticity, . . . lapses of visibility, . . . great winds. . . . whistling B, C

  513. toe-marks,] toe marks, B, C

  514. Elder Beings.] elder beings. ¶ B, C

  515. shewed] showed B, C

  516. entities.] entities. ¶ B, C

  517. earth’s] Earth’s B, C

  518. surface,] surfaces, Bc

  519. tenant.] tenant. ¶ B, C

  520. Meanwhile] Meanwhile, B, C

  521. trap-doors] trapdoors A, B, C

  522. pseudo-memory] pseudomemory B, C

  523. depended.] depended. ¶ B, C

  524. defence] defense B, C

  525. feelings,] feelings B, C

  526. Yet . . . everything] Yet, . . . everything, Bc

  527. summarised] summarized B, C

  528. hence] hence, Bc, C

  529. dreams.] dreams. ¶ B, C

  530. Meanwhile] Meanwhile, Bc, C

  531. Enclosed] Inclosed B, C

  532. for] for, Bc, C

  533. coloured] colored B, C

  534. story.] story. ¶ B, C

  535. 49, . . . Str.,] 49, . . . St., B; 49 . . . St., C

  536. 18 May,] May 18, B, C

  537. 30, . . . Str.,] 30 . . . St., B, C

  538. N. Y.] New York B, C

  539. c/o . . . U.S.A.] c/o Am. Psychological Society, 30, E. 41st Str., N. Y. City, U.S.A. A; c/o . . . U. S. A. B

  540. My dear Sir:—] My Dear Sir: B; My Dear Sir: C

  541. them”,] them,” B, C

  542. world.] world. ¶ B, C

  543. 500] five hundred B, C

  544. limit.] limit. ¶ B, C

  545. They] There B, C

  546. blacks] blackfellows B, C

  547. 30 or 40] thirty or forty B, C

  548. circle] circle of Bc

  549. mile’s] mile in B, C

  550. 10 or 12] ten or twelve B, C

  551. enclose] inclose B, C

  552. see.] see. ¶ B, C

  553. over to] into Bc

  554. them.] them. ¶ B, C

  555. and in time] and, in time, B, C

  556. interested,] interested B, C

  557. shewed] showed B, C

  558. and] and the B, C

  559. legends.] legends. ¶ B, C

  560. Meanwhile] Meanwhile, B, C

  561. articles,] articles B, C

  562. once . . . descriptions] once, . . . descriptions, B, C

  563. enclosed] inclosed B, C

  564. civilisation] civilization B, C

  565. legends.] legends. ¶ B, C

  566. engineer,] engineer C

  567. cement or concrete.] cement or concrete. ¶ B, C

  568. these] those B, C

  569. heaven] Heaven B, C

  570. organisations] organizations B, C

  571. funds.] funds. ¶ B, C

  572. blacks] blackfellows B, C

  573. 4] four B, C

  574. 100] one hundred B, C

  575. later. Roughly,] later. ¶ Roughly B, C

  576. trying. Any . . . August.] trying. ¶ B, C

  577. Robert B. F. Mackenzie.] Robert B. F. Mackenzie. B; Robert B. F. Mackenzie C

  578. Professors] Professor B, C

  579. department (. . .),] department—. . .— B, C

  580. Ferdinand] Ferndinand C

  581. me.] me. ¶ B, C

  582. correspondent Mackenzie] correspondent, Mackenzie, B, C

  583. travel.] travel. ¶ B, C

  584. of . . . draught] om. B [changed by HPL to sufficiently small]; sufficiently small C

  585. loads.] loads. ¶ B, C

  586. pleasant,] pleasant B, C

  587. eighteen] 18 A

  588. 31st,] 31, C

  589. terror of course] terror, of course, B, C

  590. pseudo-memories] pseudomemories B, C

  591. 3,] 3rd, B

  592. Cyclopean] cyclopean A, C

  593. dream-buildings.] dream buildings. B, C

  594. recognised] recognized B, C

  595. casings.] casings. ¶ B, C

  596. found;] found— C

  597. mutely] minutely Bc

  598. aëroplane] aeroplane A, C; airplane B [changed by HPL to aeroplane]

  599. sand.] sand. ¶ B, C

  600. which] om. B, C

  601. pseudo-familiarity] familiarity B, C

  602. terrain . . . northeast.] terrain. C

  603. memory.] memory. ¶ B, C

  604. dream-periods.] dream periods. B, C

  605. nearly buried] nearly-buried A

  606. some] low B, C

  607. traces.] traces. ¶ B, C

  608. 11th,] 11th, A; 11, B, C

  609. a gibbous moon] the Moon B [changed by HPL to the moon]; the moon C

  610. pallor.] pallor. ¶ B, C

  611. moonlight] Moonlight Bc

  612. torch.] torch. ¶ B, C

  613. substance] substance, B, C

  614. realise] realize B, C

  615. which] om. Bc

  616. legendry.] legendry. ¶ B, C

  617. Things] things B, C

  618. earth’s] Earth’s B

  619. wind-like,] windlike, B, C

  620. trap-doors] trapdoors A; trap-/doors B, C

  621. that] om. B, C

  622. realised] realized B, C

  623. enthusiasm.] enthusiasm. ¶ B, C

  624. and] and the Bc

  625. record.] record. ¶ B, C

  626. them.] them: B, C

  627. eleven,] eleven C

  628. walks;] walks, B, C

  629. precincts.] precincts. ¶ B, C

  630. moon,] Moon, B

  631. sky] sky, B, C

  632. did not . . . last] om. B, C

  633. a.m.] a. m., B, C

  634. everyone] every one B, C

  635. moonlight.] Moonlight. Bc

  636. yet] yet, B, C

  637. air.] air. ¶ B, C

  638. Prof.] Professor B, C

  639. ground] ground, B, C

  640. moon] Moon B

  641. the] beginning of A2

  642. Prof.] Professor A2, B, C

  643. condition.] condition. ¶ B, C

  644. northeast.] northeast. ¶ B, C

  645. obvious.
] end of A2

  646. Seeing . . . work,] om. C

  647. made my son promise] my son promised C

  648. alone.] alone. ¶ B, C

  649. Humouring] Humoring B

  650. afternoon;] afternoon, B, C

  651. sight.] sight. ¶ B

  652. half regretted] half-regretted A

  653. Perth July 20,] Perth on July 20th, B; Perth on July 20, C

  654. 25th,] 25th, A

  655. on] upon B, C

  656. son at least] son, at least, B, C

  657. widely.] widely. ¶ B, C

  658. pseudo-mnemonic] mnemonic B, C

  659. moon.] Moon. B

  660. half-shrouded] half shrouded B, C

  661. Cyclopean] cyclopean A, C

  662. aeons.] aeons. ¶ B, C

  663. pseudo-memories.] pseudomemories. B, C

  664. ploughed] plowed B, C

  665. pre-human] prehuman B, C

  666. Race.] Race. ¶ B, C

  667. omniscient] omniscient, B, C

  668. the] om. C

  669. moon] Moon B

  670. and cycads] om. B, C

  671. so far seen,] seen so far, B, C

  672. away.] away. ¶ B, C

  673. moon] Moon B

  674. realised] realized B, C

  675. these] those B, C

  676. sand-worn] sandworn C

  677. moon] Moon B

  678. torch.] torch. ¶ B, C

  679. simultaneously.] simultaneously. ¶ B, C

  680. these] those B, C

  681. closely related] closely related B, C

  682. conception.] conception Bc

  683. aeon-shaken] aeon-shaking C

  684. design.] design. ¶ B, C

  685. dream-glimpses] dream glimpses B, C

  686. me.] me. ¶ B, C

  687. Cyclopean] cyclopean A, C

  688. subterrene] subterrane Bc, C

  689. Square of Pillars] square of pillars A, Bc

  690. me?] me? ¶ B, C

  691. machines, . . . archives,] machines . . . archives B, C

  692. trap-doors] trap doors A; trapdoors B, C

  693. bottom,] bottom B, C

  694. dream-world,] dream world, B, C

  695. centre] center B, C

  696. moonlight,] Moonlight, Bc

  697. palaeogean] A; Paleogean B [changed by HPL to paleogean]; paleogean C

  698. pseudo-memories] pseudomemories B, C

  699. myth-cycles] myth cycles B, C

  700. uncovering?] uncovering? ¶ B, C

  701. draught] draft B, C

  702. moonlight] Moonlight Bc

  703. above.] above. ¶ B, C

  704. earth’s] Earth’s B, C

  705. sudden,] sudden C

  706. descent.] descent. ¶ B, C

  707. Cyclopean] cyclopean A, C

  708. precariously.] precariously. ¶ B, C

  709. only unbroken blackness.] darkness. C

  710. mind,] mind B, C

  711. wraith-like,] wraithlike, A, B, C

  712. me.] me. ¶ B, C

  713. strown] strewn B, C

  714. fragments] fragments, Bc

  715. perception.] perception. ¶ B, C

  716. moonlit] Moonlighted Bc; moonlight C

  717. return.] return. ¶ B, C

  718. on] at B, C

  719. carving . . . nearly] carving / seemed to have acted on the sandstone / nearly Bc

  720. way.] way. ¶ B, C

  721. torchlight] searchlight B, C

  722. explain.] explain. ¶ B, C

  723. earth’s] Earth’s B

  724. credibility.] credibility. ¶ B, C

  725. somehow] somehow, B, C

  726. mind.] mind. ¶ B, C

  727. dreamt] dreamed B, C

  728. nuance] nuance B, C

  729. shewed] showed B, C

  730. oriented.] oriented. ¶ B, C

  731. realised] realized B, C

  732. God’s] Heaven’s B, C

  733. debris] débris B

  734. moonlight] Moonlight B

  735. view.] view. ¶ B, C

  736. eld] old B, C

  737. subterrene] subterrane Bc

  738. its] the B, C

  739. earth’s] Earth’s B

  740. writing-master,] writing master, B, C

  741. a] the B, C

  742. Antarctica, had chiselled] antarctica, had chiseled B; Antarctica, had chiseled C

  743. walls?] walls? ¶ B, C

  744. down,] down C

  745. modelled] modeled B, C

  746. dream-fragments] dream fragments B, C

  747. time,] time B, C

  748. realised] realized B, C

  749. me.] me. ¶ B, C

  750. I?] I? ¶ B, C

  751. knob-twistings] knob twistings B, C

  752. terrestrial] Terrestrial B

  753. familiar.] familiar. ¶ B, C

  754. debris] débris B

  755. daemoniac] demoniac A, B, C

  756. dream—] dream B, C

  757. intermittently.] intermittently. ¶ B, C

  758. roof.] roof. ¶ B, C

  759. pseudo-memory.] pseudomemory. B, C

  760. plunged,] plunged B, C

  761. daemoniac] demoniac A, B, C

  762. crumbling yet familiar archways.] crumbling, yet familiar, archways. ¶ B, C

  763. bare or debris-filled.] bare, or débris-filled. B; bare, or debris-filled. C

  764. recognised] recognized B, C

  765. stonework] stone-/work B; stone-work C

  766. beneath.] beneath. ¶ B, C

  767. trap-door] trapdoor B, C

  768. post-human] post-/human B; posthuman C

  769. landing-spot] landing spot B, C

  770. debris] débris B

  771. safety.] safety. ¶ B, C

  772. last] last, B, C

  773. metal half-buried] metal, half buried B, C

  774. realised,] realized, B, C

  775. debris-cluttered] débris-cluttered B

  776. subterrene] subterrane Bc

  777. buildings.] buildings. ¶ B, C

  778. corridors . . . well-remembered] om. C

  779. weakness,] weakness B, C

  780. windowless . . . alien] windowless, . . . alien, B, C

  781. origin.] origin. ¶ B, C

  782. 200] two hundred B, C

  783. inclines.] inclines. ¶ B, C

  784. debris] débris B

  785. vast] vast, B, C

  786. metal-purveyors,] metal purveyors, B, C

  787. stones,] stone, B, C

  788. know.] know. ¶ B, C

  789. debris] débris B

  790. within] in B, C

  791. hand-held,] hand-/held, B; handheld, C

  792. marvellous] marvelous B, C

  793. side.] side. ¶ B, C

  794. chiselled] chiseled B, C

  795. realised,] realized, B, C

  796. had oddly] had, oddly, B, C

  797. earth-protected] Earth-protected B

  798. itself.] itself. ¶ B, C

  799. size,] size B, C

  800. toughness,] toughness C

  801. contours;] contours, B, C

  802. archway.] archway. ¶ B, C

  803. shelf-doors] shelf doors B, C

  804. masonry.] masonry. ¶ B, C

  805. dust-covered] dust covered A

  806. below a gaping] beneath a gaping, B, C

  807. earth-tremors.] Earth tremors. B; earth termors. C

  808. or] and B, C

  809. sub-classes] subclasses B, C

  810. characters] character Bc

  811. unusual.] unusual. ¶ B, C

  812. 20 × 15] twenty by fifteen A, B, C

  813. top.] top. ¶ B, C

  814. queerly pigmented,] queerly-pigmented, A

  815. utterly] om. B, C

  816. memory.] memory. ¶ B, C

  817. slightly] slightly, Bc

  818. fragment.] fragrant. Bc

&nb
sp; 819. non-terrestrial] non-/Terrestrial B

  820. document] document, C

  821. recognising] recognizing B, C

  822. footfalls] foot-falls C

  823. catacombs . . . silence.] catacombs. ¶ B, C

  824. pavements.] pavements. ¶ B, C

  825. recollections,] recollection, B, C

  826. profounder] profound C

  827. lock.] lock. ¶ B, C

  828. reason?] reason? ¶ B, C

  829. Eventually] Eventually, B, C

  830. deeply buried] deeply-buried A

  831. floor, and as] floor. ¶ As B, C

  832. trap-doors.] trapdoors. B, C

  833. trap-door] trapdoor B, C

  834. yawned.] yawned. ¶ B, C

  835. cool,] cold, C

  836. air,] air B, C

  837. trap-door] trapdoor A, B, C

  838. Ahead] Ahead, B, C

  839. why.] why. ¶ B, C

  840. Earth] earth B

  841. realised] realized B, C

  842. floor] floor, B, C

  843. disquieting.] disquieting. ¶ B, C

  844. were of course] were, of course, B, C

  845. trap-door] trapdoor A, B, C

  846. shewn] shown B, C

  847. dream-memories] dream memories B, C

  848. well.] well. ¶ B, C

  849. what (. . . realise)] what—. . . realize— B, C

  850. shew] show B, C

  851. tiptoe] tiptoed B, C

  852. open.] open. ¶ B, C

  853. up,] up B, C

  854. teeth] teeth, B, C

  855. needed.] needed C

  856. all,] all B, C

  857. noise.] noise. ¶ B, C

  858. but] but, B

  859. begun] began C

  860. difficultly] om. B, C

  861. creaking.] creaking. ¶ B, C

  862. half-numb] half numb B, C

  863. memory-rhythm] memory rhythm B, C

  864. them.] them. ¶ B, C

  865. intricate] intricate, B, C

  866. greyish case-ends] grayish case ends B, C

  867. noise.] noise. ¶ B, C

  868. 20 ? 15] twenty by fifteen B, C

  869. inches.] inches. ¶ B, C

  870. floor,] floor B, C

  871. realisation . . . paralysed my faculties.] realization . . . paralyzed my faculties. ¶ B, C

  872. hypnotised] hypnotized B, C

  873. memory.] memory. ¶ B, C

  874. temporised] temporized B, C

  875. screwed up] collected B, C

  876. all] all, B, C

  877. almost] om. C

  878. silence.] silent. B, C

  879. mockery.] mockery. ¶ B, C

  880. shewing] showing B, C

  881. around] about B, C

  882. fangs.] fangs. ¶ B, C

  883. fingers] fingers, B, C

  884. curious] curious, B, C

  885. comes] came Bc

  886. underground.] underground. ¶ B, C

  887. draught-giving] draft-giving B, C

  888. re-pass] repass B, C

  889. draughts] drafts B, C

  890. possible] om. B, C

  891. blacks,] blackfellows, B, C

  892. subterrene] subterrane Bc; om. C