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The way Chili told it when he got back to Karen’s and they were in the kitchen: “He fell off his sun deck and was killed.”
She said, “He fell off his sun deck.”
“The railing gave way on him for some reason. When he leaned on it.”
She said, “The railing gave way . . .”
“Yeah, and he fell. I’d say about a hunnerd feet.”
“You went down, looked at him?”
“The Bear did. I never would’ve made it, it’s steep.”
“It was an accident?” Karen said. “I mean you didn’t hit him or push him and he happened to fall?”
“I’ll take a polygraph neither one of us touched him.”
“But you didn’t call the police.”
“Not with a suitcase full of cocaine in the house. Also he had that gun in his hand. He still wanted to shoot me.”
Karen poured their coffee. She sat across from him at the kitchen table and watched him put two spoons of sugar in his and stir it slowly, carefully, smoking a cigarette. He looked up at her. She thought he was going to ask if she was still watching him, but he didn’t. He smiled, stirring his coffee. He said after a moment, not smiling now, “You think I might’ve done it. I say I didn’t, but you still think I might’ve. What can I tell you?”
Karen didn’t say anything. He was a cool guy. Or seemed cool because she didn’t know him and maybe never would. She thought, All right, the guy fell off his sun deck. She said to Chili, “Were you scared?”
“You bet I was scared.”
“You don’t act like it.”
“I was scared then, not now. How long you want me to be scared?”
There was a silence. She heard him blow on his coffee and take a sip.
“The meeting’s at two-thirty,” Karen said. “Harry wants to pick us up.”
They sat around the coffee table in the living room part of Elaine’s office at Tower waiting for Michael to get off the phone. Chili listened to Harry saying that as soon as this guy told him the story he knew they had a picture. Elaine saying that from what she’d heard so far it did sound off-trail, a shylock not your usual good guy. Harry saying that was the beauty of it, a hard-on type metamorphosized by his love of a woman. Elaine saying she hoped he didn’t soften up too much, become limp. Chili thinking, Jesus Christ. Michael came over from Elaine’s desk and took a seat next to Karen on the hard sofa. Chili, in his dark-blue suit, looked at Michael in his beat-up flight jacket thinking, What if it’s that same fuckin jacket was at Vesuvio’s?
They waited while Michael put his hand on Karen’s leg, told her she looked great, then started explaining to everybody why he was leaving his agent who—they wouldn’t believe this—couldnot acquire a property Michael wanted, couldnot make a deal with the writer, and if an agent couldn’t make a deal with a writer, for Christ sake . . . Until Chili said, “You want to talk about that one or this one?” It got a surprised look from Michael and Harry, deadpan reactions from Karen and Elaine, and the meeting started.
Elaine: “Mr. Palmer?”
Chili: “Okay. Open at the drycleaning shop. You see the shylock talking to Fay, the wife.”
Michael: “I thought the guy was an agent.”
Chili: “I changed him back to a drycleaner.”
Michael: “You still don’t have a script?”
Karen: “They’re working on the moral dilemma.”
Michael: “That writes itself. I want to know what happens.”
Chili: “Yeah, that’s what I’m telling you.”
Michael: “Let’s go to the third act and then come back if we want. You build to a climactic scene. What is it?”
Chili: “You’re referring to the action, with Ray Carlo.”
Michael: “Who’s Ray Carlo?”
Chili: “He was Bones, I changed his name. Okay, Randy finally catches up with Leo . . .”
Michael: “Wait. Who the fuck is Randy?”
Chili: “Randy’s the shylock. You need a nice-guy name. You don’t want to call him Lefty, Cockeye, Joe Loop, one of those.”
Elaine: “Sonny’s nice.”
Chili: “It’s not bad. I know a Lucky, a Jojo, Momo, Jimmy Cap, Cowboy, Sucky, Chooch . . .”
Elaine: “Sucky?”
Michael: “Okay, I’m Randy, for the moment anyway. What happens?”
Chili: “They catch up with Leo the drycleaner, Randy leans on him a little, not much, and Leo tells them, okay, the dough’s out at the airport in a locker. So Randy and Fay have the key and are at the moral dilemma part when Ray Carlo shows up. Actually he’s already there, searching the place when they get home from Leo’s. Carlo, he’s got a gun, takes the key offa Randy and Randy says okay, you win, the dough’s out at the airport. Ray Carlo leaves to go get it and Randy calls the FBI.”
Michael: “All he’s doing is picking up money. What would they arrest him for?”
Chili: “They’d at least give him a hard time. Randy knows this and wants to see it, so he and Fay go out to the airport. They see the bust and look at each other with surprise, ’cause what’s in that locker is not money but cocaine. You understand? Leo was settingthem up, or anybody that got on to him.”
Michael, frowning: “That’s how it ends?”
Chili: “No, you still have Leo.”
Michael: “I thought Carlo was the heavy.”
Chili, noticing the way Karen was staring at him: “That’s what you’re suppose to think. No, that’s the surprise. Leo’s the bad guy, from the beginning.”
Elaine: “Good. I like Leo.”
Harry: “Leo has delusions of grandeur, wants to be famous, hobnob with movie stars, entertainers.
Elaine: “He could be fun to watch, while the other guy’s just a heavy.”
Michael: “Leo’s a schmuck.”
Elaine: “He’s sort of schmucky, that’s all right.”
Karen: “He could have some funny lines, out of desperation.”
Michael: “Wait a minute—”
Chili: “Yeah, he could be funny. I still think, though, he oughta fall off the balcony.”
There was a silence.
Michael, quietly: “Okay . . . what balcony?”
Chili: “Leo’s apartment, twenty floors up overlooking Sunset. He’s with this starlet, they’re drinking, doing coke, when Fay and Randy walk in. Basically what happens, here’s Leo and here’s the guy he’s been paying for years and was always scared to death of. But right now Leo’s flying on coke and booze and doesn’t know enough to be scared ofany thing, this little drycleaner. What he wants to do is put the shylock down—you know what I mean? Dishonor him, this guy he thinks of as a hard-on, a regular mob kind of guy.” Chili paused. “Suddenly Leo jumps up on the cement railing of the balcony and says, ‘Let’s see if you got the nerve to do this, tough guy.’ The starlet screams. Fay yells at him to get down. The shylock doesn’t do nothing, he watches, ’cause he knows this guy basically is a loser. He watches Leo take three steps and that’s it, off he goes, screaming all the way down twenty floors to the pavement.”
There was a silence again.
Michael: “That’s how it ends?”
Chili: “After that, they find the money in the closet. They have another moral dilemma talk, a short one, and take off for Mexico in a brand-new Mercedes.”
Michael, to Elaine: “You know what I do in this picture? I stand around and watch.”
Chili: “You want to shoot somebody? Or, hey, you want to play Leo? Take the dive?”
Elaine: “I don’t know why, but Leo fascinates me. The little drycleaner with all that money. I’d like to see what he does with it.”
Harry: “Sure, the guy must think he’s died and gone to heaven.”
Michael: “Elaine—”
Elaine: “He wouldn’t have to take the dive, would he?”
Karen: “Not if he lives on the ground floor.”
Michael: “Is it a comedy? At this point, who knows?” Grins. “I can see why y
ou don’t have a script. All you have is an idea, and you know what ideas are worth.”
Chili: “Michael?”
Michael: “I’m going to London tomorrow. New York a few days and then grab the Concorde. But I’ll put my writer on it first. By the time I get back next month we should have a treatment we can play with and then go right into a first draft.”
Chili: “Michael, look at me.”
Michael, grinning: “Right. That’s what it’s all about, right there, the look.”
Chili: “You don’t mind my saying, Michael, I don’t see you as the shylock.”
Michael: “Really . . . Why not?”
Chili: “You’re too short.”
Harry waited till they were in the car, driving along the street of sound stages toward the main gate.
“You have to be out of your mind, talk to a guaranteed box-office star like that. You blew any chance of getting him.”
Chili, in the backseat, kept quiet. It was too hard to explain why during the meeting he started seeing Michael as Leo, thinking that if he wanted to play Leo, great; and after that couldn’t see him as the shylock. It had nothing to do with the fact he didn’t like the guy or trust him or would never loan him money, the guy was still a great actor.
Karen said, “Harry, we knew going in he’d back out sooner or later, it’s what he does.”
“Then what was the meeting for?”
“Elaine, she loves the whole idea, except the ending. You heard her, she thinks Pacino would be perfect.”
Chili said, “He’s kinda short too, isn’t he?”
“They all are,” Karen said. “You shoot up.”
They drove through the gate and followed a side street to Hollywood Boulevard.
“What if,” Chili said, “Leo hops on the railing and makes a speech. Says how he sweated, worked his ass off all his life as a drycleaner, but he’s had these few weeks of living like a movie star and now he can die happy. In other words he commits suicide. Steps off the balcony and the audience walks out in tears. What do you think?”
Karen said, “Uh-huh . . .” Harry said he wanted a drink and Karen said that wasn’t a bad idea. Chili didn’t say anything, giving it some more thought. Fuckin endings, man, they weren’t as easy as they looked.
The Extras
I. ALL BY ELMORE: THE CRIME NOVELS; THE WESTERNS
II. SELECTED FILMOGRAPHY
III. IF IT SOUNDS LIKE WRITING, REWRITE IT
V. MARTIN AMIS INTERVIEWS “THE DICKENS OF DETROIT”
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All by Elmore
The Crime Novels
The Big Bounce(1969);Mr. Majestyk (1974);52 Pickup (1974);Swag* (1976);Unknown Man #89 (1977);The Hunted (1977);The Switch (1978);City Primeval: High Noon in Detroit (1980);Gold Coast(1980);Split Images (1981);Cat Chaser (1982);Stick (1983);LaBrava (1983);Glitz (1985);Bandits (1987);Touch (1987);Freaky Deaky (1988);Killshot (1989);Get Shorty (1990);Maximum Bob (1991);Rum Punch (1992);Pronto (1993);Riding the Rap (1995);Out of Sight (1996);Be Cool (1999);Pagan Babies (2000);“Fire in the Hole”* (e-book original story, 2001);Tishomingo Blues (2002);When the Women Come Out to Dance: Stories (2002).
The Westerns
The Bounty Hunters*(1953);The Law at Randado* (1954);Escape from Five Shadows* (1956);Last Stand at Saber River* (1959);Hombre* (1961);The Moonshine War* (1969);Valdez Is Coming* (1970);Forty Lashes Less One* (1972);Gunsights* (1979)Cuba Libre (1998);The Tonto Woman and Other Western Stories* (1998).
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The Crime Novels
The Big Bounce(1969)
Jack Ryan always wanted to play pro ball. But he couldn’t hit a curveball, so he turned his attention to less legal pursuits. A tough guy who likes walking the razor’s edge, he’s just met his match — and more — in Nancy. She’s a rich man’s plaything, seriously into thrills and risk, and together she and Jack are pure heat ready to explode. But when simple housebreaking and burglary give way to the deadly pursuit of areally big score, the stakes suddenly skyrocket. Because violence and double-cross are the name of this game — and it’s going to take every ounce of cunning Jack and Nancy possess to survive . . . each other.
Houston Chronicle: “[Leonard is] a sage poet of crime.”
From the novel:
She was facing him now, her cold look gone and smiling a little. Of course it’s loaded.
“You going to shoot something?”
“We could. Windows are good.”
“So you brought a gun to shoot at windows.”
“And boats. Boats are fun.”
“I imagine they would be. How about cars?”
“I didn’t think about cars.” She seemed pleasantly surprised. “Isn’t that funny?
“Yeah that is funny.”
“There’s a difference,” Ryan said, “between breaking and entering and armed robbery.”
“And there’s a difference between seventy-eight dollars and fifty thousand dollars.”
Nancy said, “How badly do you want it?”
Mr. Majestyk(1974)
Vincent Majestyk saw too much death in the jungles of Southeast Asia. All he wants to do now is farm his melons and forget. But peace can be an elusive commodity, even in the Arizona hinterlands — and especially when the local mob is calling all the shots. And one quiet, proud man’s refusal to be strong-armed by a powerful hood is about to start a violent chain reaction that will leave Mr. Majestyk ruined, in shackles, and without a friend in the world — except for one tough and beautiful woman. But his tormentors never realized something about their mark: This is not his first war. Vince Majestyk knows more than they’ll ever know about survival . . . and everything about revenge.
Bergen Record: “First rate . . . an excellent thriller . . . well-plotted and smoothly written and crackles with suspense.”
From the novel:
Majestyk was running across the open scrub, weaving through the dusty brush clumps, by the time Renda got out of the car and began firing at him with the automatic, both hands extended in the handcuffs. Majestyk kept running. Renda jumped across the ditch, got to the fence, and laid the .45 on the top of a post, aimed, and squeezed the trigger three times, but the figure out in the scrub was too small now and it would have to be a lucky shot to bring him down. He fired once more and the automatic clicked empty.
Seventy, eighty yards away, Majestyk finally came to a stop, worn out, getting his breath. He turned to look at the man standing by the fence post and, for a while, they stared at one another, each knowing who the other man was and what he felt and not having to say anything. Renda crossed the ditch to the Jag and Majestyk watched it drive away.
52 Pickup(1974)
Detroit businessman Harry Mitchell had had only one affair in his twenty-two years of happy matrimony. Unfortunately someone caught his indiscretion on film and now wants Harry to fork over one hundred grand to keep his infidelity a secret. And if Harry doesn’t pay up, the blackmailer and his associates plan to press a lot harder — up to and including homicide, if necessary. But the psychos picked the wrong pigeon for their murderous scam. Because Harry Mitchell doesn’t get mad . . . he gets even.
Chicago Tribu
ne: “A splendid thriller.”
From the novel:
The Gray Line sightseeing bus was approaching the foot of Woodward Avenue when Bobby Shy started up the aisle in his light-gray business suit and sun-glasses, past the thirty-six heads he had counted from his seat in the rear. They were mostly couples, out-of-town conventioneers and their wives, middle-aged or older, almost all of them wearing glasses and name tags.
“That beautiful structure on the left is the City-Country Building,” the driver was saying into the mike clipped to his lapel. “And the statue in front is the world-famous ‘Spirit of Detroit.’ Sitting there, that man is sixteen feet high and weighs over sixteen thousand pounds. Ahead of us now you see the Detroit River.”
As the bus turned left onto Jefferson, heads raised and gazes shifted to look at the river and dismal gray skyline beyond.
“Across the way, beautiful downtown Windsor, Ontario,” the drive said. “You can get over to Canada by tunnel or bridge. There used to be a ferry, but I believe he was arrested some time back. The amazing thing is that, at this particular point, Canada is south of the United States.”